Dont be rude and say my English sucks and not give your reason. Say about opinions on the story. I accept all types of opinions whether they be complimenting my skills and effort or criticizing them. As long as you explain what made you think that way so I can further improve my writing As the direction the story will be heading to. It wont be non-stop sex every paragraph because this focuses more on the story than the sex scenes. Nonetheless there will be sex scenes. This first chapter is basically the introduction. ————————————————————————————————————- Light was seeping through my eyes, a blur in front of me was shaping into a beautiful womans face as my eyes fluttered open. Her face was so serene yet tears were falling down her face. Her smile showed happiness yet her eyes showed sadness. Once she noticed that I had woken up her face tensed and then slowly calmed as she spoke. Im so grateful you are alive. This women seemed to know me yet I didnt know who she was. She had my head. I quickly found that they looked and were Californian in most of the bad senses of that word; they weren’t friendly. The wife was sitting next to me showing much too much cleavage for a business-type dinner. Her dress was considerably shorter than Belinda’s and Belinda’s was short. She leaned toward me exposing her bra-less state and asked where I was from.I answered, “Rural Georgia.” Belinda’s ears perked up as she heard my exaggerated accent.“Oh. I guess you aren’t used to this type of party and a dress like mine?”“I could say that but it wouldn’t be true. There are groups in every area, even backwoods Georgia ones, that go in for gratuitous shows of skin. I’m not impressed.”She didn’t like that. She said, “You don’t like the way I’m dressed?”“I don’t mind it but would prefer you lean on someone else.”Her husband or whatever didn’t seem to like my rejection of her and said, “Are you rejecting Marci?” I had seen him as they came in. He had had a few but wasn’t big enough to be a.
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