Vodka man exited the turnstile and left the library. Thank you Jesus, Buddha and Psych 101!All elevators were going up, except for one. She knew she had to take the one going down. She didn’t see anyone there who entered the down elevator, and wondered who had pressed the button. Perhaps she had and had forgotten. The elevator doors closed, and it started descending. Technically there were only a couple of levels below, but she heard and felt the rhythmic metallic noise of the elevator crossing a floor more than twenty times. She gulped. This seemed dangerous. It reminded her of the atavistic descent portrayed in Jacob’s Ladder. It was nothing alike, and yet there was a quality to it. The elevator doors opened with deliberate slowness, and she stepped out into what appeared to be a dark corridor with very faint phosphorescent lighting. She didn’t know what to do, when the lighting went off, and she was bathed in pitch blackness, not knowing where her feet were. Horror hit her in the. (DebbieL) Some feedback would be most welcome.(*Wendy-J) Jill, as a budding writer, I can say that any nit-picking is welcome! I'm sure all would agree.(Elaine) If the e-mail is written well and the criticism is justified, then I would take it.(Jill) I've been told horror stories of sensitive writers, who don't come back after a bad review.(Elaine) How many fan e-mails do you think I get a week, one, if I am lucky! LOL(*Wendy-J) A lot less than I do I'm sure Elaine!(PJ) (I would have to say that if you can't take honest, constructive criticism, you really shouldn't be posting stuff in public.)(Elaine) Agreed PJ. I found that when I posted the "Aunt Roberta" story I got some tremendous feedback, Rhonda Wagram took a deep interest in it and we became good friends.(Anne) But do "mainstream" writers get any more feedback?(Darkside) Elaine, would you favor 'ratings' or grades for stories?(*Wendy-J) All stories start out with 100 for perfection, with points deducted for whatever.(Jill).
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