The comments pretty much boiled down to:* I appreciate the points you made about the quality of writing "But your intro really sets you up for failure."It did. My syntax was terrible, the dialog was flat and so on and so-forth (my main character had three different names.)* There was one in particular by a "Vickie" that hit the nail on the head. The nicest part: "You're so self-consciously self-contradictory, self-vaunting and self-evasive, I hardly know where to begin. So I'll won't begin. I'll end.Forget yourself. Just write the best you know how and let your readersjudge. Some will be grateful." Vickie, keep on writing. Every paragraphwas a punch to the gut - no, not so much a punch, as it was an attempt toremove a very large distasteful blockage from one's inner airway. Thankyou. Don't apologize to anyone. In the mildly paraphrased words of TinaFey, "Bitch is the new black! Remember those nuns at school! You'd hatethose bitches, but goddammit you'd know the capital of. “Can’t blame the dress,” Sal said. “It’s an inanimate object and it wasn’t exactly made for that job was it? Next time we’ll do things differently and more carefully.” she said, with a wink. “Oh, there WILL be a next time then?” I asked. Sal said, “Oh yes! But not yet, we both need to chill a bit, and I want time to get 100% fit." You’re on your own for a few days, I’m afraid and I want to phone around a few of our shops and see if they’ve got any “Seconds” that I can maybe take up to head office. If I get to I see them about my TV/Rejects shop ideas, if they’re interested.” “My clothes are your clothes. Enjoy them any time, day or night, except for those dresses!"Sally said. "I might just sit and watch you sometimes if you like? I’d like to see what you do when you’re on your own.” “Right now, I’m going back up stairs to finish my toilette. Do not disturb, on pain of death!” CHAPTER 2I realised it was 7am, I’d completely lost track of time. I was well fortified so started on the.
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